I like it, actually. Something about it suits you.
[it might look even better if he did take two seconds for it, but...]
Would you let me comb it out? Just to see.
[it's a little impulse she wants to follow, born from nothing so much as she knows how nice it feels for her when someone does that - with how much he's having to bear up, it might feel good to simply let himself be a little spoiled.]
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[it might look even better if he did take two seconds for it, but...]
Would you let me comb it out? Just to see.
[it's a little impulse she wants to follow, born from nothing so much as she knows how nice it feels for her when someone does that - with how much he's having to bear up, it might feel good to simply let himself be a little spoiled.]